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浙江财经大学黄学规教授，近日寄赠他的新著《雨燕斋吟稿（第二卷）》（浙江大学出版社2021年8月第1版），全书33.5万字。作者2017年出版该书“第一卷”，被诗界誉为“民族诗人”。笔者曾撰写读后感《怀着自信从容而吟》，也被收录“第二卷”。

人民日报社原社长、总编辑邵华泽书赠作者五言绝句：“诗作务求精，难能立意新。凛然松柏气，更兼水云襟。”历年来，作者荣获“李白杯成就一代大家”“杜甫杯诗圣奖金奖”“中华诗词特殊贡献奖”“爱国杰出诗人”“铸魂金杯奖”等荣誉称号。

“任他桃李争春色，甘守清心自在情。”（《桐花》）五年间，作者怀持桐花甘于寂寞、超然物外的淡泊心境，新诗迭出，诗意磅礴，别有一番韵致。“第二卷”共收录了作者诗词259首，或咏人或咏物或咏景或咏史，其主题正如书封自题词：“为中华民族的伟大复兴而讴歌。”

“雁点晴空飞淡远，又闻四处桂花香。”（《秋桂》）秋天的清丽景象，处处充满蓬勃生机，散发缕缕芳香，给人无限的欣悦。作者的格律诗词新作，追求的正是此番意境。作者是中华诗词学会会员，他创作的诸多旧体诗，不仅走出“为文造情”的俗套，更有文体解放的勇气，摒弃旧体诗中保守性的一面。正如邵华泽所言：“凛然松柏气，更兼水云襟。”

“心清若水春风起，坎坷人生亦永芳。”（《无常》）笔者以为，当前的旧体诗创作表现不足的有三点，一是有些创作者富有歌颂新时代的热情，但生活感受不够细致入微；二是有的表现闲愁过多，远离生活；三是在创作形式上过于呆板僵化，过多讲究平水韵，缺乏鲜活性。作者以世间的永恒变化，反映出人生的起落。追求时代性，弘扬主旋律。他在给笔者的信中写道：“第二卷中有大量诗词描写当今多彩的时代。我们正生活于激情奋进的时代，我要为时代立传，为人民造像。”

“砥柱中流拼血性，回肠荡气忘安危。”（《白衣战士》）正因为作者胸怀国家，心系人民，紧随时代的脚步，疫情期间接连写下了二十多首抗疫诗词。如《召唤》《国士钟南山》《人民英雄张伯礼》《人民英雄张定宇》《人民英雄陈薇》《火神山》《李文亮医生》《驰援》《李兰娟院士》《庚子武汉元宵》《庚子春节》《众志成城》《白衣战士》《万众一心》《风月同天》《人间至贵》《国际逆行者》《并肩携手》《黎明》《执炬逆行》《沧海横流》《山河无恙》等等。“一声召唤合民意，共克时艰万众求。”这是时代的强音，赞颂了大爱无疆，民族的伟力。作者坚决走在抗击疫情诗歌的最前沿，以昂扬的意志，提笔呐喊助力。“壮士在高歌”（臧克家），不愧为“人民诗人”。

“甲午回眸弘壮志，中华奋起胜雄狮。”（《甲午祭》）书中有关历史和时代的诗词居多，如《缅怀英烈》《林则徐》《张謇》《警钟》《重生》《卢沟桥》《满江红·大道行》《神机军师》《母子双雄》《和平将军》《海棠依旧》《金银滩》《马兰谣》《红船》等等。还有描写部队官兵的诗词，如《天涯哨兵》《乃堆拉》《红其拉甫》《瓦罕走廊》《卡拉苏》《西陲第一哨》等佳作，倾注了作者全部的热情，尽心咏叹，细致入微，充满着殷切的思念和对英雄、对军人的赞歌，以及对历史的敬畏。

“群峰藏有佳风景，丽水挺胸气自华。”（《丽水牧歌》）作者写下了许多脍炙人口的咏景诗，如《安吉余村》《古堰画乡》《金华治水》《塞罕坝》《嘉峪关》《百里柳江》《凉山变迁》《天渠》《八达岭》《中国天眼》《楠溪行》《洞头岛》《三江源》《三峡之秋》《白堤桃柳》等等，放声歌唱祖国的山山水水，豪情歌颂祖国的日新月异。英国哲学家、散文家培根说过：“旅行，在年幼者，是教育的一部分；在年长者，便是经验的一部分。”作者游而有记，自不待言。

“诗人爱写春光美，夏日斑斓胜锦霞。”（《夏日》）作者热爱人民，热爱和平；热爱生活，热爱美景。因此，这本新著给人无限哲理，耐人寻味。当代人写旧体诗，最忧的是陷入无病呻吟，用今人的调去唱古人的歌。作者的创作从“第一卷”诗意雅俗共赏以注解形式的探索，到“第二卷”格调内容扩展的优质提升，其标志便是出现了更多富有时代气息催人奋进的精品力作，尤其是每首诗词的注解更为行云流畅，紧贴时代的脉搏。作者用格律诗词这种旧的文学形式来表达当代生活和当代情感，并为之找寻到合适的语言和形式，尽量使用简洁明快的语意语句，建立起一种富有创新的说话方式。也可以说，这本书已不是诗词集，而是一本散文集，因为每首诗词的注解或长或短已超越了诗词的语言，是作者思想远行的笛声。

“如梅典雅添茶韵，清艳奇葩淡淡香。”（《茶梅》）一般而言，旧体诗词的作者，大多局限在文人圈，不像新诗词的作者遍布社会各界。他们在吟唱之时，自娱自况的意味较浓，缺少广泛的交流与普及，从这个意义上解读，这本新著较好地突破了这个局限，不但表达了创作者内心微妙情愫的捕捉和雕刻，而且为阅读者提供了良好的文化欣赏和精神生活的体验，逐渐走出了一条新路。面对现实，面对真实的自我，努力在艺术上进一步借鉴新诗、翻译诗还有民歌等资源，互相学习，互相包容，促进中国诗歌的发展。这是一本新时代的格律诗词普及本，会受到广大读者的靑睐。据悉，作者许多新作大多在手机和电脑上完成并予交流，这对文化语言的传承，对世道人心的观察与体悟，都大有益处。

孔子言：诗，可以兴，可以观，可以群……努力耕耘好供种子生长的土壤，期待作者“第三卷”早日繁花绽放，让更多的读者从这些民族的“人和故事”中，感受到中华民族的文化特质和奋斗精神。

英文直译

English literal translation

Shen Wenhua

Huang Xuegui, Professor of Zhejiang University of Finance and economics, recently sent his new book "Yin manuscript of swift Zhai (Volume II) (Zhejiang University Press, 1st edition, August 2021), with 335000 words. The author published the "first volume" of the book in 2017 and was praised as a "national poet" in the poetry circle. The author once wrote "chanting calmly with confidence" after reading, which was also included in "Volume II".

Shao Huaze, former president and editor in chief of the people's daily, presented the author with a five character quatrain: "it's hard to achieve new ideas in poetry by seeking perfection. It's awe inspiring, pine and cypress, and also water and cloud lapel." over the years, the author has won honorary titles such as "Li Bai cup achievements for a generation", "Du Fu cup poetry Saint award Gold Award", "special contribution award of Chinese poetry", "patriotic outstanding poet" and "soul casting gold cup award".

"Let his peach and plum compete for spring, and be willing to keep a pure heart and feel at ease." (Tonghua) for five years, the author cherished Tonghua's indifferent mood of being lonely and detached. New poems appeared one after another, with great poetic flavor and unique charm. "Volume II" contains 259 poems by the author, chanting people or things, scenery or history. Its theme is like the inscription in the book cover: "eulogizing the great rejuvenation of the Chinese nation."

"Wild geese fly away in the clear sky and smell sweet scented osmanthus everywhere." (autumn osmanthus) the beautiful scene of autumn is full of vitality everywhere, sending out wisps of fragrance and giving people infinite joy. The author's new metrical poems pursue this artistic conception. The author is a member of the Chinese poetry society. Many of his old style poems not only get out of the stereotype of "creating feelings for literature", but also have the courage to liberate style and abandon the conservative side of old style poetry. As Shao Huaze said: "awe inspiring pines and cypresses, but also water and cloud lapel."

"The heart is as clear as water, the spring breeze rises, and the ups and downs of life are eternal." (impermanence) the author believes that the current creation of old style poetry is insufficient in three aspects. First, some creators are full of enthusiasm for praising the new era, but their life feelings are not detailed enough; Second, some show too much leisure and worry and stay away from life; Third, the creative form is too rigid, too much emphasis on flat water rhyme, lack of fresh activity. The author reflects the ups and downs of life with the eternal changes in the world. Pursue the times and carry forward the theme. In his letter to the author, he wrote: "there are a lot of poems in the second volume to describe today's colorful era. We are living in an era of passion and progress. I want to make a biography for the times and make statues for the people."

"The mainstay works hard, and the soul is stirring, forgetting safety." (the soldier in white) precisely because the author cherishes the country, cares about the people, and follows the footsteps of the times, he wrote more than 20 anti epidemic poems one after another during the epidemic period. Such as "call", "national scholar Zhong Nanshan", "people's hero Zhang Boli", "people's hero Zhang Dingyu", "people's hero Chen Wei", "Huoshen mountain", "Doctor Li Wenliang", "rush for help", "Academician Li Lanjuan", "gengzi Wuhan lantern Festival", "gengzi Spring Festival", "United will make a city", "soldiers in white clothes", "one heart and one mind", "wind and moon in the same sky", "the most precious in the world" and "international rebel" "Join hands side by side", "dawn", "holding a torch retrograde", "across the sea", "mountains and rivers are safe" and so on. "One call is in line with the public opinion and overcome difficulties and demands of all." this is the strong voice of the times and praises the boundless love and the great strength of the nation. The author resolutely walks at the forefront of the poetry to fight against the epidemic situation, raises his pen and cries with high will. "Heroes are singing" (Zang Kejia) , worthy of the title of "people's poet".

"Looking back at the great aspirations of the Chinese people in the 1894-1895 Festival, the Chinese people rose up to win the lion." (the 1895-1895 Festival) there are many poems about history and the times in the book, such as "remembering the heroes", "Lin Zexu", "Zhang Jian", "alarm bell", "rebirth", "Lugou Bridge", "Red River · the road trip", "Shenji military master", "mother and son", "peace general", "Begonia still", "gold and silver beach", "Malan ballad" and "red boat" And so on. There are also poems describing the officers and soldiers of the army, such as the sentinel at the end of the world, naidui La, Hongqi La Fu, wahan corridor, Kalasu, the first outpost in the western border and other excellent works, which pour all the author's enthusiasm, chant wholeheartedly, detail, full of ardent thoughts, hymns to heroes and soldiers, and awe of history.

"There are beautiful scenery hidden among the peaks, and Lishui is proud of itself." (Lishui Pastoral) the author has written many well-known scenery poems, such as anjiyu village, ancient weir painting Township, Jinhua water control, Saihan dam, Jiayuguan, Baili Liujiang River, Liangshan change, Tianqu, Badaling, China's heavenly eye, Nanxi trip, Dongtou island and the source of three rivers "Autumn of the Three Gorges", "peach willow on the white embankment" and so on, sing loudly about the mountains and rivers of the motherland and praise the rapid changes of the motherland. Bacon, a British philosopher and essayist, said: "travel is a part of education for the young; it is a part of experience for the elderly." it goes without saying that the author has a record of traveling.

"The poet loves to write about the beauty of spring, and the beauty of summer is better than the beauty of brocade." (summer) the author loves the people, peace, life and beauty. Therefore, this new book gives people infinite philosophy and is thought-provoking. When contemporary people write old style poetry, the most worrying thing is to fall into a groan without illness and sing the songs of the ancients with the tune of modern people. The author's creation starts from "Volume I" Poetic, refined and popular, exploration in the form of annotation, to "Volume II" The high-quality improvement of the expansion of style and content is marked by the emergence of more high-quality works full of the flavor of the times, especially the notes of each poem are more fluent and close to the pulse of the times. The author uses the old literary form of metrical poetry to express contemporary life and contemporary emotion, finds appropriate language and form, and tries to use concise and lively language as much as possible It can also be said that this book is no longer a collection of poetry, but a collection of prose, because the annotation or length of each poem has exceeded the language of poetry and is the flute sound of the author's thought.

"If plum is elegant, it adds tea charm, and it is clear and beautiful, and exotic flowers have a faint fragrance." (tea plum) Generally speaking, the authors of old style poetry are mostly confined to the literati circle, unlike the authors of new poetry all over the community. When they sing, they have a strong sense of self entertainment and lack of extensive communication and popularization. In this sense, this new book breaks through this limitation. It not only expresses the capture and carving of the creator's subtle feelings, but also serves as a reference for reading They have provided a good experience of cultural appreciation and spiritual life, and gradually embarked on a new path. Facing the reality and the real self, they strive to further learn from new poetry, translated poetry, folk songs and other resources in art, learn from each other, tolerate each other, and promote the development of Chinese poetry. This is a popular book of metrical poetry in the new era, which will be favored by the majority of readers. According to I have learned that many of the author's new works are mostly completed and communicated on mobile phones and computers, which is of great benefit to the inheritance of culture and language and the observation and understanding of the people of the world.

Confucius said: poetry can flourish, view and group... Strive to cultivate the soil for seed growth, and expect the author's "Volume III" to bloom as soon as possible, so that more readers can feel the cultural characteristics and struggle spirit of the Chinese nation from the "people and stories" of these nationalities.